The Mystery of My Parents
The doorbell rings. I opened the doors of my house to check
who is there at this hour of the night, exactly midnight, starting the day of
my 18th birthday, a package was left which could change my entire life, written
on it, sent by my Parents. This is largely unexpected as my parents died in
mysterious ways, supposedly a car crash, which left me with my over weight
Grandpa and underweight grandma. Grandma was the only thing that kept me from
running out of this house, but now things have changed and she is on her death
bed. I decide to go to sleep and open the package tomorrow, but first check my
Grandma. I went to her room to know, she died peacefully in her sleep, now the
things are clear enough, I am going to go away from my grandpa, such far away
he can not treat me as he likes. I leave a note for him, as he wouldn't even
care if grandma died, being drunk most of the time, I leave the house for once
and all. It was 5 in the morning when I was waken up by the loud goods train
passing the station on which I slept, being not a very good night having most
of my time fighting some strays asking for money and mosquitoes trying to take
my blood, I was sleepless. Dread passed me as I remembered of my Grandma's
lifeless body. The package still lay besides me as I used as a pillow for my
sleepy head.I opened the package up to see nothing but a large envelope,
written all over it - ' ONLY FOR JOSEPH' , Joseph, yes that was me, who cared
still in the world for me to send this package, must be a prank but why not
open it? Inside I saw a pair of glasses, what, a pair of glasses for me, who
thought i would wear those weird glasses? Their was a note besides it which
read , "Joseph, Hope this package reached you safely with the glasses. I
know you are reading it while on being on the train station, sorry that your
grandma passed away yesterday, but you have a mission left, to find out how
your parents died, Complete it and then there will be a reward greater than
anything else for you waiting. Your well wisher , Anonymous " . This was
completely weird, a pair of glasses by an anonymous person and finding out the
cause of the death of my parents. Great, here is where most adventures start
but this is the sole motive of my life now, so let's do it. I wear the glasses
and i get a blinding flash over my eyes , must be something, I feel nausea
capturing me, then the glasses spoke - ' TIME TRAVELLING TO 16TH DECEMBER,
2011' - that was the day my parents were killed, yeah time travelling with
glasses is fun, very much. I waited for 9 minutes to be exact , and that was
the number of years ago my parents died, these glasses took me 1 year back per
minute, and at last here I was, at the right very pavement behind the bushes
from where my parent's car was going to crash with a tow truck. I saw them pass
by, yes, I saw them pass by, they were not killed by any sort of truck, I am
now following them seeing what they do next, not running of course, bicycling
on my way. I saw them go inside the Octagon, the fictional high security
chambers for Secret agents of the countries. I need to know what happened so I
moved forward with my bike , yeah changed bicycle to bike as I am 18 above. The
glasses started again - 'YOU ARE ONE TOUGH BOY. NOW FIRST THANK ME FOR GIVING
YOU THE IDEA OF BIKE. NEXT I AM STARTING INVISIBILITY AND ABILITY TO PASS
THROUGH ANYTHING.' , OK the glasses AI namely - Tuesday , is helping me get
through obstacles. I am going in and after a while I will tell you what
happened. OMG! I now know exactly what happened , my Parents were alive, they
never died, instead there dead clones made in OCTAGON were sprayed with blood
and kept at the crime site. My parents went to a planet known as BH-34c45 as I
saw them board a rocket and disappear, they disappeared right in front of me
and this glasses said - ' TIME'S UP KIDDO. YOU KNOW YOUR PARENTS ARE ALIVE. LET
ME NOW TAKE YOU TO THE PRESENT AND SHOW YOU IN A HOLOGRAPHIC WAY WHAT THEY LEFT
FOR YOU. BUT FOR THAT YOU HAVE TO GO BACK AND HELP YOUR GRANDPA, HOWEVER BAD HE
MAY BE'. Sigh, going back to the prison although now he has no rights on me
still I dont like him because the way he treated me in the past. I went back to
the funeral with some flowers, on questioned where I went, I told to bring some
flowers for my grandma.At last after the funeral procession was over, Grandpa
quietly cried a lot in the living room, alone. I went to the attic as the
glasses directed me to, and there was a photograph of everyone in my
family,Mother, Father and some old people. The Old people should have been my
Grandpa and Grandma but they were different. Then the Glasses spoke - 'HEY
KIDDO. WHAT DO YOU THINK, THE PEOPLE YOU SAY GRANDMA AND GRANDPA ARE YOUR
MOTHER AND FATHER. BH-34c45 IS NEAR A VERY SMALL STAR AND THUS, THEY AGES 80 TIMES
FASTER, AND WHEN THEY RETURNED YOU WERE JUST 1 YEAR OLDER AND THEY WERE LIKE
YOUR GRANDMA AND GRANDPA, THUS THEY REPLACED THEM AS YOUR GUARDIANS'. A long
pause and realization swept through me, it was my father and not my grandpa in
the living room and-and the per..person who died was my MOTHER. I lived with
them everyday still wasn't able to figure it out. I went to my dad and told him
the truth, he said everything I experienced was true and he and his mother took
the wrong decision leaving me alone, they regretted it till date. He showed me
his photo on planet BH-34c45 and the mystery of my parents was solved at last.
HOPE YOU LIKED THE STORY, ALSO PLEASE COMMENT IN THE SECTION BELOW OF THE CHANGES AND MODIFICATIONS YOU THINK WOULD MAKE THIS STORY BETTER....
~ Arnav
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DeleteBut l don't understand how can time near a black hole go faster instead time in black hole is very slow because light cannot even escape a black hole and light only notify us of day and night so if day and night is very slow time would also go very slow.
ReplyDeleteTime was a constrain along with word limit, while I was writing this story.... thus, made a few mistakes... will try to get a new idea on how to make time faster... thanks again for your valuable feedback😊😊
DeleteActually light cannot escape from a black hole because the gravitational pull of it is gigantic. If we think logically, a black hole's birth happens, when a star dies, and stars have enormous gravitational power, eg - our Sun keeps the whole solar system intact. As for time going fast or slow in black holes, there is almost no proven logic or evidence of it bcuz nothing ever escapes a black hole. Also, the story is a work of imagination so creativity can do anything. Besides mostly in stories and movies which feature black holes, time moving really fast is shown. Not with any certain logic but to match with the storyline I guess...
DeleteYes, as spoken earlier the time and words constrain led me to write a black hole... This was just Creativity and I wrote everything I felt from my inside without applying any practical basis..... But Keshav was correct, Time can never be faster than our reference to a place which has a greater gravity in its midst.... For easy understanding take the Gravity - Time Graph, A black hole would surely push it more downwards than our current position Earth, so Time would also be bent according to Einstein's Theory of relativity, We from our perspective would see time to be slower near the Black Hole.
DeleteChanged the Black Hole into A VERY SMALL STAR which would change the the above reason inversely, and thus, time would move faster.. 80 TIMES FASTER... Thank you Keshav for your feedback again and thanks Atraiu as well for giving me the necessary push to find out the correct answers.
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